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The two maps illustrated the distribution of the facilities of the May city in 1950 and in the present.

The two maps illustrated the distribution of the facilities of the May city in 1950 and in the present. pRKV0
The two maps illustrated the distribution of the facilities of the May city in 1950 and in the present. A close look reviews that a man-made lake was created by manually expanding along the path between the business district and the government building and constructing the dam in the distant part of the river. Business district also has developed to the south side of the river around the old bridge during the old bridge. The resident community has expanded dramatically by about 10 times in size around the business district. The old government building was downsized; however, a big new one has been built in the south of the city. The airport remains in the same location, but its size increased about three times. The traffic roads have developed as well by adding one more road with a small bridge across the east side of the river which merged with one of two major roads before the airport. Overall, during the past 70 years, the city has tremendously developed  in terms of its size of city and its population which increased 10 times from 20 thousand in 1950 to 200 thousand nowadays.
The two maps illustrated the distribution of the facilities of the May city in 1950 and in the present.

A close look reviews that a 
man
-made lake
was created
by
manually
expanding along the path between the business district and the
government
building and constructing the dam in the distant part of the river.

Business district
also
has developed to the south side of the river around the
old
bridge during the
old
bridge. The resident community has expanded
dramatically
by about 10 times in size around the business district. The
old
government
building
was downsized
;
however
, a
big
new one has
been built
in the south of the city.

The
airport remains in the same location,
but
its size increased about three times.
The
traffic roads have developed
as well
by adding one more road with a
small
bridge across the east side of the river which merged with one of two major roads
before
the airport.

Overall
, during the past 70 years, the city has
tremendously
developed
 
in terms of its size of city and its population which increased 10 times from 20 thousand in 1950 to 200 thousand nowadays.

IELTS academic The two maps illustrated the distribution of the facilities of the May city in 1950 and in the present.

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