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The bar chart gives information about the number of social network users in the US from 2008 to 2014.

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The bar chart gives information about the number of social network users in the US from 2008 to 2014. Overall, it can be seen that, the amount of social network users increased over the whole period doubling from 84. 5 million in 2008 to 164. 9 million in 2014. Looking into the detail, there were 84. 5 million of social network users in the US in 2008 (41. 6% of people). The number of social network users increased dramatically over the next year reaching 109. 2 million in 2009 (51. 6% of people in the US). Following that, the number of social network users rose just under 18 million over the next year reaching 127 million in 2010 (57. 5% of people). After that, the amounts of social network users increased slightly over the next 4 years reaching 140. 2 million in 2011 (61. 2%), 150. 4 million in 2012 (63. 5%), 157. 9 million in 2013 (64. 7%) and 164. 9 million in 2014 (65. 8%).
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in the US from 2008 to 2014.

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increased
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the whole period doubling from 84. 5
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in 2008 to 164. 9
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million
in 2014.

Looking into the detail, there were 84. 5
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in the US in 2008 (41. 6% of
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people
). The number of
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network
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increased
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year reaching 109. 2
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in 2009 (51. 6% of
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people
in the US).

Following that, the number of
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rose
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year reaching 127
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in 2010 (57. 5% of
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). After that, the amounts of
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increased
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4 years reaching 140. 2
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in 2011 (61. 2%), 150. 4
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in 2012 (63. 5%), 157. 9
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in 2013 (64. 7%) and 164. 9
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in 2014 (65. 8%).

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