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The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. qV0bw
The table provides data on how much water is used for agriculture, industry and domestic purposes in six states. Overall, it is clear that developing countries tend to use more water for agriculture, whereas developed countries use more water for industry. Further, domestic water use is the lowest of the three categories in all countries except Brazil and Nigeria. Looking at the agriculture data sets in more detail, it can be seen that the percentage of water which was used is the highest in Nigeria at 86%, followed closely by Brazil at 84%. Australia, Germany and the UK all show similar levels of water use, at 38%, 32% and 28%, respectively. Turning to data sets for industry, it is evident that use of water for this purpose is the highest in the UK, at 67%. The percentage of water which was used is the lowest in Nigeria, at 3%, which is the lowest value on the table. Industrial water use is the same in India and Brazil, both at 9%. Finally, water use for domestic purposes is the highest in Brazil, at 17%, followed by Australia at 14%, while the lowest usage of water for this purpose is in the UK, at 5%.
The table provides data on how much
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for agriculture, industry and domestic
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in six states.

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developing countries
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more
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for agriculture, whereas
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developed countries
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more
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for industry.
Further
, domestic
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is the
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of the three categories in all countries except Brazil and Nigeria.

Looking at the agriculture data sets in more detail, it can be
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seen
that the percentage of
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which was
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used
is the highest in Nigeria at 86%, followed
closely
by Brazil at 84%. Australia, Germany and the UK all
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similar levels of
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, at 38%, 32% and 28%,
respectively
.

Turning to data sets for industry, it is evident that
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of
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for this
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is the highest in the UK, at 67%. The percentage of
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which was
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is the
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lowest
in Nigeria, at 3%, which is the
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value on the table. Industrial
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is the same in India and Brazil, both at 9%.

Finally
,
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for domestic
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is the highest in Brazil, at 17%, followed by Australia at 14%, while the
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usage of
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is in the UK, at 5%.
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IELTS academic The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries.

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