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The give graph shows the consumption of fast food in UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer making comparisons where relevant and reporting the main features.

The give graph shows the consumption of fast food in UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer making comparisons where relevant and reporting the main features. Ajw0N
The line graph provides information about the quality of three different kinds of fast food consumed in the United Kingdom over a twenty-year period between 1970 and 1990. Overall, it is clear that the consumption of hamburger, fish and chips experienced upward trend during the research period. In addition, the amount of pizza that people consumed declined considerably. In 1970, there was a steadiness in the amount of pizza, on average, people consumed 300 grams; compared to approximated 60 grams for fish and chips, 40 grams for hamburger. Between 1970 and 1980, there was a dramatic slump in the quality of pizza by 90 grams. While the figure for hamburger, fish and chips continued to increase to 80 grams and 150 grams respectively. Furthermore, end of 1980, the consumption of pizza, fish and chips were at the same 210 grams. In 1985, the consumption of fish and chips climbed quickly to 300 grams. Additionally, end of 1985, the amount of pizza and hamburger were both consumed at 210 grams. From 1985 to 1990, the quality of fish and chips jumped sharply to 500 and become the highest figure during the research period. At the same time, there was a dramatic significantly in the amount of hamburger that people consumed from 120 grams to 280 grams. Moreover, there was a slight growth in the consumption of pizza, with a rise of over 10 grams in just 5 years from 1985 to 1990.
The line graph provides information about the quality of three
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in the United Kingdom over a twenty-year period between 1970 and 1990.

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of hamburger, fish and chips experienced upward trend during the research period.
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amount
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people
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consumed
declined
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300
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grams
; compared to approximated 60
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for fish and chips, 40
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grams
for hamburger. Between 1970 and 1980, there was a dramatic slump in the quality of pizza by 90
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grams
. While the figure for hamburger, fish and chips continued to increase to 80
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and 150
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respectively
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of 1980, the
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of pizza, fish and chips were at the same 210 grams.

In 1985, the
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of fish and chips climbed
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at 210
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. From 1985 to 1990, the quality of fish and chips jumped
sharply
to 500 and become the highest figure during the research period. At the same time, there was a dramatic
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from 120
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5 years from 1985 to 1990.
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IELTS academic The give graph shows the consumption of fast food in UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer making comparisons where relevant and reporting the main features.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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