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the graph below shows the number of overseas students living in Australia between 1982 to 2000

the graph below shows the number of overseas students living in Australia between 1982 to 2000 LrbQR

The line graphs illustrates four countries including Indonesia, Hong Kong, Malaysia, and Singapore of residence of overseas students in Australia over 18 years from 1982 to 2000. Overall, the number of students from Indonesia, Hong Kong, Malaysia and Singapore living in Australia has increased over 18 years. At the beginning of period, the number of Malaysians students living Australia was the highest. In contrast, the number of students from Hong Kong, Singapore and Indonesia was the lowest and following that the number of Indonesian students was the lowest in the final years It is clear that, in 2000, the number of Indonesians living in Australia was the highest, while the lowest were Malaysians. The highest population of Indonesians living in Australia was in 1998. In contrast, the lowest population of Indonesians living in Australia is in 1982. According to the line graph, the number of Indonesians living in Australia increased dramatically between 1994 to 1997 and slowest between 1982 to 1986. It is clearly evident that between the mid of 1982 to the middle of 1988, Malaysians living in Australia remained the same, and neither did it increase nor decrease. Furthermore, the number of Malaysians living in Australia was the greatest in 1997 while the lowest in 1982. The highest amount of Singaporeans living In Australia was the highest in 2000. on the contrary, it was the lowest in 1982. On the other hand, we can see from the chart that the Hong Kong residence of visitor arrivals for educations in 1982 was the lowest while in 1997 was the highest

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