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The two maps illustrate how changes were made over the town between the year 1995 and present

The two maps illustrate how changes were made over the town between the year 1995 and present BL2Y9
overall, According to map there have huge changes. the town has more developed than previous year. more leisure has developed, housing has expanded and forest replaced with playing ground. at present people are getting more facilities than 1995 At present year the town focused on more development likewise housing are extended to the northwest to the town, roads has expanded to southwest of the town sea has cleaned shops are replaced with resturents.
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has more developed than previous year.
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leisure has developed, housing has expanded and forest replaced with playing ground.
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are getting more facilities than 1995

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focused on more development
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, roads has expanded to southwest of the
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sea has cleaned shops
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IELTS academic The two maps illustrate how changes were made over the town between the year 1995 and present

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  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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