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The graph show how much people got cancer, DVC, and diabetes. Summarixe the information by selecting àn reporting the main features and make comparisons

The graph show how much people got cancer, DVC, and diabetes. Summarixe the information by selecting àn reporting the main features and make comparisons m870d
The graph illustrates the number of people who get CVD, cancer, and diabetes over a period of 4 years, from 2007 to 2011 Overall, the number of people who got the disease increased over the period in the question. Looking at the details, there was a gradual growth in the number of people who got cancer from 2007 to 2010, then the figure decline slightly, finishing at around 2000 people in 2011. It can be seen that the quantity of people who got CVD and diabetes fluctuated. If we look at the cases of VCD, there was a significant drop to under 3000 cases in 2008 while the cases of diabetes witnesses a slight climb to 1000 cases. The figure for the people who got diabetes boom, reach a peak to 4000 cases in 2009 then plummet over the next 2 years. The number of cases of DVC fluctuated in the different direction with a remarkable rise over a period of 2 years, from 2008 to 2010, then dropped sharply to 4000 cases
The graph illustrates the
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IELTS academic The graph show how much people got cancer, DVC, and diabetes. Summarixe the information by selecting àn reporting the main features and make comparisons

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