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The line chart illustrates the amount of fish and some categories of meat such as chicken, beef, and lamb consumed in a European nation over a 25-year period starting from 1979.

The line chart illustrates the amount of fish and some categories of meat such as chicken, beef, and lamb consumed in a European nation over a 25-year period starting from 1979. kLPGe
The line chart illustrates the amount of fish and some categories of meat such as chicken, beef, and lamb consumed in a European nation over a 25-year period starting from 1979. Overall, it can be seen from the chart that beef, lamb, and fish consumption experienced a downward trend while the opposite was true for the consumption of chicken over the given period. Additionally, fish was the food that is eaten the least over the research years. In 1979, the amount of beef consumed registered around 220 grams each person on a weekly basis before witnessing a fluctuation at around 60 grams in 5 following years, followed by a slight increase to 230 grams in 1988. In the following years, the consumption of beef declined dramatically to approximately 100 grams per person. In contrast, chicken consumption surged from 145 grams to nearly 250 grams between 1979 and 2004. The figure for lamb consumed was 150 grams for each person in 1979 and then this figure dropped sharply to around 50 grams in 2004. Meanwhile, the amount of fish eaten fell minimally from 60 grams to 45 grams in 1984, followed by remaining almost stable from 1984 to 2004.
The line chart illustrates the amount of fish and
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, and lamb consumed in a European nation over a 25-year period starting from 1979.

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seen
from the chart that
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beef
, lamb, and fish
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consumption
experienced a downward trend while the opposite was true for the
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consumption
of chicken over the
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period.
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the least over the research years.

In 1979, the amount of
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beef
consumed registered around 220
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grams
each person on a weekly basis
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before
witnessing a fluctuation at around 60
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grams
in 5 following years, followed by a slight increase to 230
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grams
in 1988. In the following years, the
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consumption
of
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beef
declined
dramatically
to approximately 100
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grams
per person.
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In
contrast, chicken
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consumption
surged from 145
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grams
to
nearly
250
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grams
between 1979 and 2004.

The figure for lamb consumed was 150
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grams
for each person in 1979 and then this figure dropped
sharply
to around 50
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grams
in 2004. Meanwhile, the amount of fish eaten fell
minimally
from 60
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grams
to 45
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grams
in 1984, followed by remaining

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almost
stable from 1984 to 2004.

IELTS academic The line chart illustrates the amount of fish and some categories of meat such as chicken, beef, and lamb consumed in a European nation over a 25-year period starting from 1979.

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