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The table illustrates the all-time top Olympics medals in several sports, and the line graph depicts the amount of medals earned by five different countries over all Olympics.

The table illustrates the all-time top Olympics medals in several sports, and the line graph depicts the amount of medals earned by five different countries over all Olympics. 0MR59
The table illustrates the all-time top Olympics medals in several sports, and the line graph depicts the amount of medals earned by five different countries over all Olympics. Overall, the American athlete won the most medals in Swimming while the sportsmen from Norway and the USSR gained the least in Biathlon and Gymnastics, respectively. In addition, the USA was the country with the highest awards won. Looking at the table more closely, Michael Phelps gained the majority of medals in the Olympics' swimming field with 22 medals. By contrast, Ole Einar and Borys Shakhlin obtained the smallest of plaques in Biathlon and Gymnastics, each with 13 medals. Additionally, Larysa acquired 18 medals in Gymnastics, which was 3 more than Nikolai. According to the line chart, the United States has the greatest quantity of crests in the Olympics with nearly 2700 medals, about five times that of Italy. Furthermore, the USSR received approximately 1200, more than twice as many as Germany’s. Finally, Great Britain achieved almost 700 ribbons.
The table illustrates the all-time top Olympics
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medals
in several sports, and the line graph depicts the amount of
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earned by five
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different
countries over all Olympics.

Overall
, the American athlete won the most
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medals
in Swimming while the sportsmen from Norway and the USSR gained the least in Biathlon and Gymnastics,
respectively
.
In addition
, the USA was the country with the highest awards won.

Looking at the table more
closely
, Michael Phelps gained the majority of
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medals
in the Olympics' swimming field with 22
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medals
. By contrast, Ole
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Einar
and
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Borys
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Shakhlin
obtained the smallest of plaques in Biathlon and Gymnastics, each with 13
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medals
.
Additionally
,
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Larysa
acquired 18
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medals
in Gymnastics, which was 3 more than Nikolai.

According to the line chart, the United States has the greatest quantity of crests in the Olympics with
nearly
2700
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medals
, about five times that of Italy.
Furthermore
, the USSR received approximately 1200, more than twice as
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many
as Germany’s.
Finally
, Great Britain achieved almost 700 ribbons.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the all-time top Olympics medals in several sports, and the line graph depicts the amount of medals earned by five different countries over all Olympics.

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