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This report will refer to two maps that depict the development of Colwick Arts Center between 2005 and today. The wilderness area has been converted into an open-air exihibition and performance section. In addition, the musicale and the movies has been replaced by the zone of the center presentation. In 2005, the center consists a tiny number of material facilities includes a refreshment bar, a conference space, a rest – room, two galleries, an information section and the performance area which is situated in the middle of the area. Nowadays, the center has entirely transformed. The galleries to the east of the center is made way for the music show. A new toilet is diminished and constructed underneath the concert-roomy. North of the center is the movie theater and the comedy workspace which is erected. Furthermore, the snack bar is demolished and turned into a coffee shop located south-west of the area and also the gallery is enlarged. wilderness area has been converted into an open-air exihibition and performance section. In addition, the musicale and the movies has been replaced by the zone of the center presentation.
This report will refer to two maps that depict the development of Colwick Arts Center between 2005 and
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today
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The wilderness
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area
has
been converted
into an open-air
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exihibition
and performance section.
In addition
, the musicale and the movies has
been replaced
by the zone of the center presentation.

In 2005, the center consists a tiny number of material facilities includes a refreshment bar, a conference space, a rest
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room, two galleries, an information section and the performance
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area
which
is situated
in the middle of the area.

Nowadays, the center has
entirely
transformed. The galleries to the east of the center
is made
way for the music
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show
. A new toilet
is diminished
and constructed underneath the concert-roomy. North of the center is the movie theater and the comedy workspace which
is erected
.
Furthermore
, the snack bar
is demolished
and turned into a coffee shop located south-west of the
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area
and
also
the gallery
is enlarged
.

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wilderness
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area
has
been converted
into an open-air
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exihibition
and performance section.
In addition
, the musicale and the movies has
been replaced
by the zone of the center presentation.
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