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Maps of a university sports complex

Maps of a university sports complex G9Arx

Given are the maps providing us with information regarding the renovation of a university’s sports complex now and then. Overall, it is starkly apparent that many infrastructures would be built during the reconstruction, moreover, some main parts would be developed too. When scrutinizing more rigorously, it can be inferred that there are two outdoor courts on both sides of the center which are untouched. The first area is located at the western part of the complex would be changed into a leisure pool and attached to the prior changing room. The second court, also, would join the main part and so many new spaces would be springing up there, at the eastern part. The old gym, additionally, would become more spacious by spanning to northern-east, while the main pool would stay pristine. Turning to the reception area, it would transform into a huge facility center by expanding in both courts. Reception still would be placed in the middle of the center, however, a sports shop plus a new changing room would be built in the southwest of the complex. Also, another changing room and a café would be constructed on the opposite side, in the southeast, which completed the modern reception site.

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Given
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many
 infrastructures would be built
 during the reconstruction, moreover
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some
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parts
 would be developed
 too.

When scrutinizing more rigorously
, it can be inferred
 that there are two outdoor courts on both sides of the center which are untouched
. The first
 area is located
 at the western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
part
 of the complex would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into a leisure pool and attached to the prior changing room. The second court, also
, would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
part
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 new spaces would be springing up there, at the eastern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
part
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 gym, additionally
, would become more spacious by spanning to northern-east, while the main pool would stay pristine.

Turning to the reception area, it would transform into a huge facility center by expanding in both courts. Reception still
 would be placed
 in the middle of the center, however
, a sports shop plus a new changing room would be built
 in the southwest of the complex. Also
, another changing room and a café would be constructed
 on the opposite side, in the southeast, which completed the modern reception site. 