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The two maps below shows an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps below shows an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. gka1
This picture demonstrate two stage of an island before and after the building of some tourist facilities. It is noticeable that a wide variety of facilitates were facilitated; hence, none of the trees were chopped-up. It is possible for tourists to swim and ride boats after the making the facilities. Many accommodations were built in middle of the island, and next to beach. The trees were circulated by accommodations in left-side of island. Also, as the left-side accommodation is closer to the beach, it is possible for tourists to reach it by footpath. The road which passes from pier (you can move by vehicle) would meet the reception. The restaurant is between reception and the sea. It is also placed in middle of accommodations. It is fascinitating that right-side of the island is unchanged, in other world there is not any facilities on it.
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two stage of an
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before
and after the building of
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tourist facilities. It is noticeable that a wide variety of facilitates
were facilitated
;
hence
, none of the trees
were chopped
-up.

It is possible for tourists to swim and ride boats after the making the facilities.
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accommodations
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in middle of the
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island
, and
next
to beach. The trees
were circulated
by accommodations in
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left
-side of
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island
.
Also
, as the
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left
-side accommodation is closer to the beach, it is possible for tourists to reach it by footpath.

The road which passes from pier (you can
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move
by vehicle) would
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meet
the reception. The restaurant is between reception and the sea. It is
also
placed in middle of accommodations.

It is
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fascinitating
that right-side of the
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island
is unchanged
, in other world there is not any facilities on it.
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IELTS academic The two maps below shows an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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144 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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