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the two maps below show road axxess to a city in 2008 and in 2010

the two maps below show road axxess to a city in 2008 and in 2010 Nmq0j
These two maps show the change in the city hospital in 2007 and 2010. We can see some of the items that have been built or improved or relocated, or some additions around the city hospital. As can be seen Nima street surrounds the hospital and it has not changed during this period of time. It is clear that the car park, public parking and bus station were located in a commonplace in the south of the city hospital in 2007, but in 2010 the place was developed and each found its place. The public parking lot is located on the right side of the hospital and leads to it from Nima Street. We can see that two roundabouts have been built on the hospital road, one at the intersection of Nima and Sina streets and the other at the intersection of Nima and Reza streets. In addition, the bus station is located on the left side of the hospital road and is accessible from these two roundabouts. On the other side of Nima Street, there is a car park and it is accessible from the south of the ring road
These two maps
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in the city
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in 2007 and 2010. We can
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items that have
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improved
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additions around the city hospital.

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Nima
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surrounds the
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hospital
and it has not
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changed
during this period of time.

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that the car park, public parking and bus station
were located
in a commonplace in the south of the city
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hospital
in 2007,
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in 2010 the place
was developed
and each found its place. The public parking lot
is located
on the right side of the
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and leads to it from
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Nima
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Street
. We can
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that two roundabouts have
been built
on the
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hospital
road, one at the intersection of
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Nima
and
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Sina
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and the other at the intersection of
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Nima
and Reza
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, the bus station
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Nima
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, there is a car park and it is accessible from the south of the ring
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IELTS academic the two maps below show road axxess to a city in 2008 and in 2010

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