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The chart below shows information about zebras and buffaloes in various nature reserves in 2010.

The chart below shows information about zebras and buffaloes in various nature reserves in 2010. 1ae9q
The given chart compares the numbers of zebras and buffaloes in several wildlife conservation areas in 2010. Overall, buffaloes outnumbered zebras in most of the given nature preserves. It is also noticeable that the buffaloes were conserved most in Klipriviersberg and Beachwood in this year. To be more specific, the total numbers of both animals in Klipriviersberg and Beachwood were ahead of the figures for two others wildlife reserves by a wide margin. Beachwood topped the list, with 83 zebras and 120 buffaloes. These numbers were slightly higher than that of Klipriviersberg. With regard to Klipriviersberg, the quantity of preserved buffaloes amounted to 115, which is considerably more than that of zebras, at only 70 units. Turning to Cape Nature, the numbers of zebras and buffaloes were practically identical, at 78 for the former and 81 for the latter. Finally, Bukit Timah was the area with the least preserved animals, at 58 for the zebras and 40 for the buffaloes. A noteworthy observation is that the quantity of zebras being reserved in this region was half as large as that of Cape Nature.
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of zebras and buffaloes in
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several wildlife
conservation areas in 2010.
Overall
, buffaloes outnumbered zebras in most of the
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nature preserves. It is
also
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were conserved
most in
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Klipriviersberg
and Beachwood in this year.

To be more specific, the total
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of both animals in
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Klipriviersberg
and Beachwood were ahead of the figures for two others wildlife reserves by a wide margin. Beachwood topped the list, with 83 zebras and 120 buffaloes. These
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were
slightly
higher than that of
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Klipriviersberg
. With regard to
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Klipriviersberg
, the quantity of preserved buffaloes amounted to 115, which is
considerably
more than that of zebras, at
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only
70 units.

Turning to Cape Nature, the
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of zebras and buffaloes were
practically
identical, at 78 for the former and 81 for the latter.
Finally
,
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Bukit
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Timah
was the area with the least preserved animals, at 58 for the zebras and 40 for the buffaloes. A noteworthy observation is that the quantity of zebras
being reserved
in this region was half as large as that of Cape Nature.

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