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The two maps below show road access to city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps illustrate the development of the road line to access a city hospital from the years 2007 to 2010. Overall, the transport infrastructure to the city was completely transformed with the addition of three main modifications. These provided the building of a new bus station, new roundabouts, and new parking facilities. In 2007, the city hospital was surrounded by square Ring Road. Next to this road, there was Hospital Road, which was the main road connected to Ring Road in the south, and City Road continued to Hospital Road. Furthermore, there were tiny six bus stops on the two sides of the main road and one car parking for workers and the public in the east of Hospital Road. By 2010, the numerous bus stops were no longer which was changed to the large bus station in the west side of Hospital Road and accessed via the new roundabouts; the first roundabout is at the three-way junction of Ring Road and Hospital Road, meanwhile the second is at the intersection of Hospital Road and City Road. In addition, the car park had been changed into an only staff in the same space and there was a new space for the members of the public in the eastern city hospital.
The two maps illustrate the development of the
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line to access a city
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hospital
from the years 2007 to 2010.

Overall
, the transport infrastructure to the city was completely transformed with the addition of three main modifications. These provided the building of a
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new
bus station,
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new
roundabouts, and
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new
parking facilities.

In 2007, the city
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hospital
was surrounded
by square Ring
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Road
.
Next
to this
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road
, there was
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Hospital
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Road
, which was the main
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road
connected to Ring
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Road
in the south, and City
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Road
continued to
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Hospital
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Road
.
Furthermore
, there were tiny six bus
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stops
on the two sides of the main
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road
and one car parking for workers and the public in the east of
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Hospital
Road.

By 2010, the numerous bus
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stops
were no longer which was
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changed
to the large bus station in the west side of
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Hospital
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Road
and accessed via the
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new
roundabouts; the
first
roundabout is at the three-way junction of Ring
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Road
and
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Hospital
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Road
, meanwhile the second is at the intersection of
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Hospital
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Road
and City
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Road
.
In addition
, the car park had been
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changed
into an
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only
staff in the same space and there was a
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new
space for the members of the public in the eastern city
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hospital
.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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