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The diagram presents the process of recycling glass bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture shows how to recycle glass bottles including three stages. On the first stage, glass bottles can be collected by the collection point, after which some tracks can deliver these glass bottles to special fcatories factories go on other stages. In addition, on the second stage, these bottles can be washed in the cleaning plant by using high pressure water, before being put into the diverse rooms of recycling plant according to different colors including brown, green and clear. After these steps, these bottles can enter the furnace to become liquid glass due to being heat, and then the recycled liquid glass can be mixed with new liquid glass. In order to make new glass bottles, the liquid mixture can be dropped into the mould. On the third stage, certain liquid products can be placed in these new glass bottles, after which these glass bottles can be put into different boxes to be sent into supermarket for customers. To sum up, the photograph illustrates the process of recycling glass bottles with about seven steps by using certain machines and equipment like cleaning plant, recycling plant, furance, mould and tracks.
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how to recycle
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glass
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bottles
including three stages.

On the
first
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stage
,
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glass
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bottles
can
be collected
by the collection point, after which
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some
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tracks
can deliver these
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glass
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bottles
to special
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fcatories
factories go on other
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stages
.
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, on the second
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stage
, these
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bottles
can
be washed
in the cleaning
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plant
by using high pressure water,
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before
being put
into the diverse rooms of recycling
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plant
according to
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different
colors including brown, green and
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clear
. After these steps, these
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bottles
can enter the furnace to become liquid
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glass
due to being heat, and then the recycled liquid
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glass
can
be mixed
with new liquid
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glass
. In order to
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make
new
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glass
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bottles
, the liquid mixture can
be dropped
into the
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mould
. On the third
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stage
, certain liquid products can
be placed
in these new
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glass
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bottles
, after which these
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glass
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bottles
can
be put
into
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different
boxes to be
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sent
into supermarket for customers.

To sum up, the photograph illustrates the process of recycling
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glass
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bottles
with about seven steps by using certain machines and equipment like cleaning
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plant
, recycling
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plant
,
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furance
,
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mould
and
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tracks
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IELTS academic The diagram presents the process of recycling glass bottles.

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3 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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