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The charts give show the information about people staying in three different accommodationareas in 1988,1998and2008.

The percentile of tourists preferred three kind of resides is depicted by the pie charts in given time period. At a fleeting glance, a significant proportion of tourists was preferred to the stay with family and friends in 1988, less than 8% of holidaymakers live in the same accommodations area in second year. Furthermore, a tiny proportion of tourists who were stay in camping in 1988, whereas 12 percent of holidaymakers preferred to live in same sectors.

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 in same sectors. 