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the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The given bar chart provides the information about the percentage of coffee and tea buying mannerism of human beings in five cities of Australia. Overall, according to the figures, the maximum proportion of people from Hobart were interested in to go to cafe for tea and coffee and people prefered to buy instant coffee rather than fresh one in all cities. It is clear from the chart, in Sydney and Melburne more than 60 percent of livers of these cities went to cafe for coffee or tea. Nearly half of citizens of Melburne had a habit of buying instant coffee, which was about 5 percent more than Sydney people. Nearly about equal percentages of people of these cities liked better to buy instant coffee. 50 % to 53 % of citizens from the three capitals opted buying instant coffee, while about 15 percent more amount of people bought fresh coffee in the same cities. At the same time, the large part of Hobart's people prefered to go to cafe for coffee or tea, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide reported in 55 % nad 50 % respectively.
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coffee
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buying mannerism of human beings in five
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cities
of Australia.
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, according to the figures, the maximum proportion of
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people
from Hobart
were interested
in to go to
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tea
and
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coffee
and
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people
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prefered
to
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buy
instant
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coffee
rather
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cities
. It is
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clear
from the chart, in Sydney and
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Melburne
more than 60 percent of livers of these
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cities
went to
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cafe
for
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coffee
or
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.
Nearly
half of citizens of
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Melburne
had a habit of buying instant
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coffee
, which was about 5 percent more than Sydney
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people
.
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about equal percentages of
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people
of these
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cities
liked better to
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buy
instant
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coffee
. 50 % to 53 % of citizens from the three capitals opted buying instant
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coffee
, while about 15 percent more amount of
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people
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bought
fresh
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coffee
in the same
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cities
. At the same time, the large part of Hobart's
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people
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prefered
to go to
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cafe
for
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coffee
or
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, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide reported in 55 %
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nad
50 %
respectively
.
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IELTS academic the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

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