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The two maps below show road access to a public library in 2010 and in 2015.

The two maps below show road access to a public library in 2010 and in 2015. gWPYa
The diagrams illustrate the change of an area near a public library that roads can access in 2010 and 2015. Overall, bus stops were removed from the Crown Road area. The bus station and 2 roundabouts were added. The public car park was relocated. The staff car park, public library, the Kingsley Road, the Crown Road, and the Ring Road were still in the same place. 6 Bus stops, which are removed, are on each side of the Crown Road. The bus station was added on the west side near the Crown Road, and it is connected to the 2 roundabouts. 2 roundabouts were added. The first roundabout was on the junction between The Ring Road and The Crown Road; on the junction, the second roundabout was located between The Kingsley Road and The Crown Road. The public car park was moved to the new place on the right side of the public library. There were 5 constructions which remained.
The diagrams illustrate the
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library that
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can access in 2010 and 2015.
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, bus
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stops
were removed
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area. The bus station and 2
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roundabouts
were
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added
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staff car park,
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library, the Kingsley
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, the Crown
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Road
, and the Ring
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were
still
in the same place.

6 Bus
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stops
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. The bus station was
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added
on the west side near the Crown
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, and it
is connected
to the 2
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roundabouts
. 2
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were
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added
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first
roundabout was on the junction between The Ring
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Road
and The Crown
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Road
; on the junction, the second roundabout
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between The Kingsley
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and The Crown
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. The
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public
car park was
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library. There were 5 constructions which remained.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a public library in 2010 and in 2015.

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