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The plan below shows the layout of the universities sports centre now and how will it look in redevelopment. Summarise the information.

The plan below shows the layout of the universities sports centre now and how will it look in redevelopment. 9wXrx
The bar graph illustrates two layouts of sport centre in the University. One represents the current layout and the other is the future layout that the University plans. In an overall observation we can see that the University is planning to introduce more clubs and facilities for the students. In the present layout the outdoor courts are not linked together, whereas the plan for the future shows that all the clubs are connected together. On the centre area of the University sports, only gym, one changing room, seating area, a 25m pool, reception area and 2 outdoors are seen in the present layout. However, in the future layout the centre areas remain the same. Instead of outdoor clubs, they are planning to construct a sports hall on the right side of seating area. There will be two more changing rooms. One sport shop on the left side with changing room and a café on the right side with the other changing room. Also, leisure pool will be there which is on the left side. In addition, two dance studios will also be introduce. In conclusion, we can see that University is trying to make the sport centre in more interesting way like introducing café, dance studios and leisure pool.
The bar graph illustrates two
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of
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centre
in the
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University
. One represents the
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current
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layout
and the other is the future
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layout
that the
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University
plans.

In an
overall
observation we can
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see
that the
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University
is planning to introduce more clubs and facilities for the students.

In the present
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layout
the outdoor courts are not linked together, whereas the plan for the future
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shows
that all the clubs
are connected
together. On the
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centre
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area
of the
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University
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sports
,
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only
gym, one
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changing
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room
, seating
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area
, a
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25m
pool, reception
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area
and 2 outdoors are
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seen
in the present
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layout
.
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, in the future
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layout
the
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centre
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areas
remain the same.
Instead
of outdoor clubs, they are planning to construct a
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sports
hall on the right side of seating
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area
. There will be two more
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changing
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rooms
. One
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sport
shop on the
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left
side with
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changing
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room
and a café on the right side with the other
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room
.
Also
, leisure pool will be there which is on the
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left
side.
In addition
, two dance studios will
also
be
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introduce
.

In conclusion
, we can
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see
that
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University
is trying to
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make
the
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sport
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centre
in more interesting way like introducing café, dance studios and leisure pool.
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IELTS academic The plan below shows the layout of the universities sports centre now and how will it look in redevelopment.

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6.0
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