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DISTRIBUTION OF THE WORLD'S WATER

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IELTS TASK 1 WRITING: WORLD'S WATER AND USE OF WATER FThe given illustrations depict how water is distributed in the world and utilized in 3 various/different countries, namely, Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada. In general, it is apparent from the pie chart that saltwater and glaciers take up the largest percentages of all water on earth. Meanwhile, as can be seen from the bar graph, Egypt and Saudi Arabia use most water for agriculture. Looking at the details, as regards/concerning/ with respect to the pie chart, salt water took up 97% of the world’s water, whereas freshwater shows a tiny percentage, enumerating 3% in the pie chart. In addition, 4/5 freshwater which is in the earth is made of Ice and glaciers, while the percentages of groundwater and surface water are significantly lower, at 20% and 1% respectively. With respect to the pie chart, Egypt and Saudi Arabia have the same system with each other while they decide to use most of the water in agriculture, at 80% and 78% respectively, whereas the use in Industry and Domestic is just around 10-15%. Moreover, citizens in Canada decide to use water in Industry, leading to the same percentages as the other 2 countries, at about 80%. In contrast, the use in agriculture and domestic use are substantially lower in Canada, at around 10-11% respectively. OR ECONOMIC SECTORS

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OR ECONOMIC SECTORS