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DISTRIBUTION OF THE WORLD'S WATER

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IELTS TASK 1 WRITING: WORLD'S WATER AND USE OF WATER FThe given illustrations depict how water is distributed in the world and utilized in 3 various/different countries, namely, Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada. In general, it is apparent from the pie chart that saltwater and glaciers take up the largest percentages of all water on earth. Meanwhile, as can be seen from the bar graph, Egypt and Saudi Arabia use most water for agriculture. Looking at the details, as regards/concerning/ with respect to the pie chart, salt water took up 97% of the world’s water, whereas freshwater shows a tiny percentage, enumerating 3% in the pie chart. In addition, 4/5 freshwater which is in the earth is made of Ice and glaciers, while the percentages of groundwater and surface water are significantly lower, at 20% and 1% respectively. With respect to the pie chart, Egypt and Saudi Arabia have the same system with each other while they decide to use most of the water in agriculture, at 80% and 78% respectively, whereas the use in Industry and Domestic is just around 10-15%. Moreover, citizens in Canada decide to use water in Industry, leading to the same percentages as the other 2 countries, at about 80%. In contrast, the use in agriculture and domestic use are substantially lower in Canada, at around 10-11% respectively. OR ECONOMIC SECTORS
IELTS TASK 1 WRITING: WORLD'S
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given
illustrations depict how
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water
is distributed
in the world and utilized in 3 various/
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different
countries,
namely
, Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada.

In general
, it is apparent from the
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pie
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chart
that saltwater and glaciers take up the largest
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percentages
of all
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water
on earth. Meanwhile, as can be
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seen
from the bar graph, Egypt and Saudi Arabia
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use
most
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water
for agriculture.

Looking at the
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details
, as regards/concerning/ with respect to the
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pie
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chart
, salt
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water
took up 97% of the world’s
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water
, whereas freshwater
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shows
a tiny
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percentage
, enumerating 3% in the
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pie
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chart
.
In addition
, 4/5 freshwater which is in the earth
is made
of Ice and glaciers, while the
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percentages
of groundwater and surface
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water
are
significantly
lower, at 20% and 1%
respectively
.

With respect to the
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pie
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chart
, Egypt and Saudi Arabia have the same system with each other while they decide to
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use
most of the
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water
in agriculture, at 80% and 78%
respectively
, whereas the
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use
in Industry and Domestic is
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just
around 10-15%.
Moreover
, citizens in Canada decide to
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use
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water
in Industry, leading to the same
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percentages
as the other 2 countries, at about 80%.
In contrast
, the
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use
in agriculture and domestic
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use
are
substantially
lower in Canada, at around 10-11%
respectively
.

OR ECONOMIC SECTORS

IELTS academic DISTRIBUTION OF THE WORLD'S WATER

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
225 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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