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Using the main points in the reading passage, show how the lecturer contradicts the claims.

Using the main points in the reading passage, show how the lecturer contradicts the claims. Jwjq5
The lecturer discredits the claim in the reading passage that bottled water is better than tap water. First, she refutes the assertion that bottled water is healthier by pointing out that 40 percent of all water in bottles comes from city water sources. In other words, it is just tap water in a bottle. Furthermore, she contends that bottled water is actually less healthy than tap water because it contains a lower level of fluoride, a mineral that retards tooth decay. Second, she maintains that minerals actually make the water taste better. Sodium, calcium, magnesium, and fluoride keep water from tasting flat. She backs up this statement by citing a taste test by Good Morning America in which 45 percent of the participants chose New York City tap water over bottled water. Third, she concedes that it would be possible to recycle the plastic bottles used for bottled water, but she points out that only 15 percent of all water bottles are ever recycled, which means that 59. 5 million of the 70 million bottles used daily in the United States are thrown into landfills.
The lecturer discredits the claim in the reading passage that bottled
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water
is better than
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tap
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water
.
First
, she refutes the assertion that bottled
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water
is healthier by pointing out that 40 percent of all
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water
in
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bottles
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comes
from city
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water
sources.
In other words
, it is
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just
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tap
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water
in a
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bottle
.
Furthermore
, she contends that bottled
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water
is actually less healthy than
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tap
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water
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because
it contains a lower level of fluoride, a mineral that retards tooth decay.

Second, she maintains that minerals actually
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make
the
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water
taste better. Sodium, calcium, magnesium, and fluoride
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keep
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water
from tasting flat. She backs up this statement by citing a taste
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test
by
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Good
Morning America in which 45 percent of the participants chose New York City
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tap
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water
over bottled water.

Third, she concedes that it would be possible to recycle the plastic
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bottles
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used
for bottled
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water
,
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but
she points out that
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only
15 percent of all
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water
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bottles
are ever recycled, which means that 59. 5 million of the 70 million
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bottles
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used
daily in the United States
are thrown
into landfills.

IELTS academic Using the main points in the reading passage, show how the lecturer contradicts the claims.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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