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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. jK71
The rendred map illustrates the information about the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2008. Overall, after overveiwing the maps, it is lucid that there were a lot of infrastructural developments can be done to look the hospital more attractive. Turning towards the details, in 2007 and 2008 the city hospital and ring road was remained same. While, in the south east direction of hospital road there was a car park facilitiy for staff and public in 2007. Whereas, in 2008 it was converted into public car facilities in the front of city hospital in 2008. Shedding light on the remaining data, in the core of city there was a roundabout in the road and the ways goes to bus station as well as staff car parking. Moreover, another roundabout goes to a city road in the south east direction. On the contrary, the hospital road remained same in 2008.
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map illustrates the information about the
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access to a city
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hospital
in 2007 and 2008.
Overall
, after
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overveiwing
the maps, it is lucid that there were
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a lot of
infrastructural developments can
be done
to look the
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hospital
more attractive. Turning towards the
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details
, in 2007 and 2008 the city
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hospital
and ring
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road
was remained
same. While, in the
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south east
direction of
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hospital
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road
there was a car park
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facilitiy
for staff and public in 2007.
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Whereas
, in 2008 it
was converted
into public car facilities in the front of city
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hospital
in 2008. Shedding light on the remaining data, in the core of city there was a roundabout in the
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road
and the ways goes to bus station
as well
as staff car parking.
Moreover
, another roundabout goes to a city
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road
in the
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south east
direction.
On the contrary
, the
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hospital
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road
remained same in 2008.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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