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The pie chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. W1pD

The provided pie charts depict data regarding age of citizens in two countries, Yemen and Italy, in 2000 and 2050. Overall, in 2000 Yemen population consists almost of only adults and kids with the minority of elder generation. Oppose to it, Italy has nearly a quarter of citizens at the age over 60 years. The considerable percentage of Yemen habitants in 2000 belongs to children at the age from 0 to 14 years and accounts for 50. 1%. Almost the rest half consists of adult people at the age from 15 to 59 years. It is envisioned that in 2050 the situation with elder generation over 60 year will leave almost the same, however the portions of adults and kids will change by 13% with increase of the former. The population of Italy has different trends. The overwhelming portion of citizens belongs to adult people which accounts for 61. 6%. The elder generation takes a second place with 25% number. However, future trends show that in 2050 they would have almost equal positions with the portions of 46. 2% and 46. 2% respectively.

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 of citizens in two countries, Yemen and Italy, in 2000 and 2050.

Overall
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 and kids with the minority of elder generation. Oppose to it, Italy has nearly
 a quarter of citizens at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 over 60 years.

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 from 0 to 14 years and accounts for 50. 1%. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessentiallyaroundpracticallyroughlyapproximatelymost
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 from 15 to 59 years. It is envisioned
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 the same, however
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 and kids will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
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 by 13% with increase of the former.

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different
 trends. The overwhelming portion of citizens belongs to adult This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 which accounts for 61. 6%. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 that in 2050 they would have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessentiallyaroundpracticallyroughlyapproximatelymost
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 equal positions with the portions of 46. 2% and 46. 2% respectively
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