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The pie chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. W1pD
The provided pie charts depict data regarding age of citizens in two countries, Yemen and Italy, in 2000 and 2050. Overall, in 2000 Yemen population consists almost of only adults and kids with the minority of elder generation. Oppose to it, Italy has nearly a quarter of citizens at the age over 60 years. The considerable percentage of Yemen habitants in 2000 belongs to children at the age from 0 to 14 years and accounts for 50. 1%. Almost the rest half consists of adult people at the age from 15 to 59 years. It is envisioned that in 2050 the situation with elder generation over 60 year will leave almost the same, however the portions of adults and kids will change by 13% with increase of the former. The population of Italy has different trends. The overwhelming portion of citizens belongs to adult people which accounts for 61. 6%. The elder generation takes a second place with 25% number. However, future trends show that in 2050 they would have almost equal positions with the portions of 46. 2% and 46. 2% respectively.
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of citizens in two countries, Yemen and Italy, in 2000 and 2050.

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, in 2000 Yemen population consists
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of
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and kids with the minority of elder generation. Oppose to it, Italy has
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over 60 years.

The considerable percentage of Yemen habitants in 2000 belongs to children at the
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from 0 to 14 years and accounts for 50. 1%.
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the rest half consists of adult
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at the
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from 15 to 59 years. It
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the same,
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the portions of
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and kids will
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by 13% with increase of the former.

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trends. The overwhelming portion of citizens belongs to adult
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which accounts for 61. 6%.
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equal positions with the portions of 46. 2% and 46. 2%
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IELTS academic The pie chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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