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Summarize the information by selecting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

Summarize the information by selecting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 1ery

Looking at the diagrams, we can notice differences in Riversdale University’s structure in 1973 and 2010. Overall, the university had witnessed several changes in 37 years. On the West side of the river, the nature reserve disappearance was the most significant difference. The replacements for that were a car park and a tram stop. A medical school building also was planned to be built in 2019 in this area. In the north-west of the river, they reconstructed the student union that was originally located in the Eastern. Almost noticeable changes lied on the East side of the river where they set up a new bridge. Firstly, the Fine Art Building turned into the Information Building. Secondly, the Social Sciences Building and the Law Building were merged while the Library confronted an extension. In conclusion, such a modernization since 1973 had experienced that make it became unrecognizable.

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Overall
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changes
 in 37 years.

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stop
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building
also
was planned
 to be built
 in 2019 in this area. In the north-west of the river, they reconstructed the student union that was originally
 located in the Eastern.

Almost noticeable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 lied on the East side of the river where they set up a new bridge. Firstly
, the Fine Art You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
Building
 turned into the Information You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
Building
. Secondly
, the Social Sciences You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
Building
 and the Law You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
Building
were merged
 while the Library confronted an extension.

In conclusion
, such a modernization since 1973 had experienced that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it became unrecognizable. 