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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The maps illustrate changes in access routes to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. In the first map, it can be seen that the hospital was surrounded by a ringroad. To the south of the hospital, a T-junction connected the ringroad with the Hospital road, which ran from north to south and were equipped with bus tops on both of its sides. A car park for staff and public was just behind the east bus-stops. Another road, the City Road, running from east to west crossed the Hospital Road. After three years, the hospital and ringroad remained largely unchanged but the roads witnessed a vast change. In 2010, two new roundabouts were built at both ends of the Hospital Rd replacing the T-junction and intersection. Furthermore, the old bus stops have been replaced by a bus station in the west and staff-only car park in the east. The car park for public has been moved to the east of the hospital just outside the ringroad. To sum up, between 2007 and 2010 it is clear that the hospital and the ring road stayed the same, while the roads were upgraded significantly with the addition of two roundabouts, a bus station, and a separated public car-park.

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changes
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hospital
 between 2007 and 2010.

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 map, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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hospital
was surrounded
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ringroad
. To the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
, a T-junction connected the Possible spelling mistake found.ring road
ringroad
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Hospital
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road
, which ran from north to south and were equipped
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just
 behind the east bus-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
. Another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, the City You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
, running from east to west crossed the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
 Road.

After three years, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 and Possible spelling mistake found.ring road
ringroad
 remained largely
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but
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 witnessed a vast This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
. In 2010, two new roundabouts were built
 at both ends of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
 Rd replacing the T-junction and intersection. Furthermore
, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
 have been replaced
 by a bus station in the west and staff-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 car park in the east. The car park for public has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the east of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 outside the Possible spelling mistake found.ring road
ringroad
.

To sum up, between 2007 and 2010 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 and the ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 stayed the same, while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
were upgraded
significantly
 with the addition of two roundabouts, a bus station, and a separated public car-park. 