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The line graph describes the information about goods imported in UK from 1974 to 2002.

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The line graph describes the information about goods imported in UK from 1974 to 2002. overall, the items transported from different countries increased noticeably at the end expect railways goods which relatively stabled. Items related to road imported was nearly about 70 million tones in 1974. There was inconsistent up and down till 1994 after that the transaction inclined significantly with the transaction of nearly 100 million tones in 2002. Railways goods of 40 million tones was landed in 1974 in UK. it also had fluctuation of till 1994 and there was improvement after that climbing expenses to just preceding 40 million mark in 2002. In 1974, quantity of nearly 40 million tones of water equipment was consumed in UK. The supply was escalate slightly till 1978 while noticeable increment of supplies kept on climbing till 2002 with more than 60 million tones of import in UK. Pipeline was the lowest invested sector in 1974 and even with huge rise on expenditure it still remained to be the smallest quantity of materials imported with the expenses of over 20 million tones in 2002. commodities of road was the highest expending field meanwhile huge change was seen on amount spend in water and rail.
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goods
imported in UK from 1974 to 2002.
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overall
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at the
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railways
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goods
which
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stabled. Items related to road imported was
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about 70
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million
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tones
in 1974. There was inconsistent up and down till 1994 after that the transaction inclined
significantly
with the transaction of
nearly
100
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million
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tones
in 2002. Railways
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goods
of 40
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million
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tones
was landed
in 1974 in UK. it
also
had fluctuation of till 1994 and there was improvement after that climbing expenses to
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preceding 40
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million
mark in 2002. In 1974, quantity of
nearly
40
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million
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tones
of water equipment
was consumed
in UK. The supply was
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escalate
slightly
till 1978 while noticeable increment of supplies
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kept
on climbing till 2002 with more than 60
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million
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tones
of import in UK. Pipeline was the lowest invested sector in 1974 and even with huge rise on expenditure it
still
remained to be the smallest quantity of materials imported with the expenses of over 20
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million
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tones
in 2002.
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commodities
of road was the highest expending field meanwhile huge
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change
was
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seen
on amount spend in water and rail.
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IELTS academic The line graph describes the information about goods imported in UK from 1974 to 2002.

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