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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. GVQx
The two images show city hospital plan in two various years - 2007 and 2010. According to them we can see changes that are made to develop road access to the hospital. The first image describes original road access which was simple and insufficient with a car park and bus stops. Clearly, the car park is tiny and all staff and hospital visitors had to park in it. Along with that, with several bus stops the Hospital Road should be crowded with cars and people, making traffic difficult. The second one shows the changes that have been made. There are two spacious car parks – one for the staff and another for the hospital visitors. Also, there is a new bus station which is separated from the main hospital road. It should be noted, in both ends of the road there are roundabouts which makes traffic calmer and less congested. In conclusion, we can say that the made changes are extremely accurate and successful, and we can see that the access to the hospital has become more open and easy to the public.
The two images
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plan in two various years
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2007 and 2010. According to them we can
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see
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changes
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access to the hospital.

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original
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road
access which was simple and insufficient with a
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car
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park
and bus
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stops
.
Clearly
, the
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car
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park
is tiny and all staff and
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hospital
visitors had to
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park
in it. Along with that, with several bus
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stops
the
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Hospital
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should
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with
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cars
and
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people
, making traffic difficult.

The second one
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that have
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. There are two spacious
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parks
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–
one for the staff and another for the
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hospital
visitors.
Also
, there is a new bus station which
is separated
from the main
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hospital
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road
. It should
be noted
, in both ends of the
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road
there are roundabouts which
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makes
traffic calmer and less congested.

In conclusion
, we can say that the made
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changes
are
extremely
accurate and successful, and we can
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see
that the access to the
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hospital
has become more open and easy to the public.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

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