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The bar graph illustrates the average earnings of the Irish citizens in US Dollars from five different years.

The bar graph illustrates the average earnings of the Irish citizens in US Dollars from five different years. MYWq
The bar graph illustrates the average earnings of the Irish citizens in US Dollars from five different years. Overall, there is a significant growth in the average earning potential of individuals with slight fluctuations before exceeding its highest range. In the year 1968, the average earning was around $7800 which was lowest among all other years but the average earning rate rose exponentially after the year 1978 until 1998 reaching to the average of $14000. However, there was a slight decrease in the numbers and in 2008 it reached $12000. Later, there was a rapid surge and by the year 2018, the average value exceeded the highest mark of $16000 hitting the all-time highest value.
The bar graph illustrates the
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of the Irish citizens in US Dollars from five
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potential of individuals with slight fluctuations
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exceeding its highest range.

In the
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1968, the
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was around $7800

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rate rose
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1978 until 1998 reaching to the
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of $14000.
However
, there was a slight decrease in the numbers and in 2008 it reached $12000. Later, there was a rapid surge and by the
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2018, the
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value exceeded the highest mark of $16000 hitting the all-time highest value.
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IELTS academic The bar graph illustrates the average earnings of the Irish citizens in US Dollars from five different years.

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3 paragraphs
115 words
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