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The two maps below show past and present changes of Paradise island

The two maps below show past and present changes of Paradise island 1A6RL
The two maps illustrate pre and post constraction images of Paradise island. Overall, the island has been changed considirably over the time period. Notably, it is apparent that trees has been knocked down and an open restaurant has been introduced in the same location. Furthermore, on the right side of restaurant has been set up cafe near the sea where Rocks is well visible. It is a great place for tourists to swim and relax. Also, there is a bike path at the edge of whole island. However, on the old map of the area we couldn't see this kind of facilities. There was only one building- Scientific Research station, a few trees and Natural spring. This natural spring is aviable on the post constraction of the map and it is a point of attraction for guests. Moving to the left side of the island, there is a swimming pool has been extended in the same time it is near the permitted swimming area of the sea. Exclusively, the port has been reconstructed, of course the Cruise ship service has been established in place of boat.
The two maps illustrate
pre
and post
constraction
images of Paradise
island
.
Overall
, the
island
has been
changed
considirably
over the time period.
Notably
, it is apparent that trees has
been knocked
down and an open restaurant has
been introduced
in the same location.
Furthermore
, on the right side of restaurant has
been set
up
cafe
near the sea where Rocks
is
well visible. It is a great place for tourists to swim and relax.
Also
, there is a bike path at the edge of whole
island
.
However
, on the
old
map of the area we couldn't
see
this kind of facilities. There was
only
one building- Scientific Research station, a few trees and Natural spring. This natural spring is
aviable
on the post
constraction
of the map and it is a point of attraction for guests. Moving to the
left
side of the
island
, there is a swimming pool has
been extended
in the same time it is near the permitted swimming area of the sea. Exclusively, the port has
been reconstructed
,
of course
the Cruise ship service has
been established
in place of boat.
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