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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in an area. Other argue on that. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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. It is a fact that food, home and clothing are the basic needs of man to live in today's world. While, few believe the latest housing should be built in the zone as the homes of the elderly. This essay will discuss why the old-house style is not a better option for the new generation and it will be expanded with some examples. First of all, the foremost reason is older house design is used to old and common. In recent time, due to rapid advancement in technology life has been become easier and faster. Morden people like to new design and new ideas of house rather than old house design. for example, in past time, people preferred to sit down and eat but in present time people like to eat on dining table. Moreover, in old days, the people of that time used to use grass and roof which used to fall when it was raining and people had to suffer a lot. However, now days individuals use the cement building which is strong and long lasting. In contrast, the old-fashioned design house was good for old people that everyone could spend the time together in one room is sit together in room which is not comfortable for recent men-kind. In Conclusion, old pattern house good for elders but in my point of view new generations would not like in the old way also it is not comfortable for everyone. Thus, new designs are allowed for today’s generation people.
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new
generation and it will
be expanded
with
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examples.

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First of all
, the foremost reason is older
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design
is
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used
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old
and common. In recent
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time
, due to rapid advancement in technology life has
been become
easier and faster.
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Morden
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people
like to
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preferred to sit down and eat
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in present
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time
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people
like to eat on dining table.
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days, the
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of that
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to
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grass and roof which
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to fall when it was raining and
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had to suffer a lot.
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the cement building which is strong and
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long lasting
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was
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together in one room is sit together in room which is not comfortable for recent
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good
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in my point of view
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generations would not like in the
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way
also
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IELTS academic Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in an area. Other argue on that. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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