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The two maps compares the changes of an island after the development of convenient tourist.

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The two maps compares the changes of an island after the development of convenient tourist. It is clear that the main construction of the island involves in the centre and west of the map. On the contrary, the more things change, the more in the east map stay the same. Before the change, the island is nothing to become tourist area. After, it is built a lot of things to found the tourist area. The many Accommodations construct to take a lot of tourist in day or day by day in the centre and west. In addition, In middle of group houses is linked by appearance Reception. Catering services are availabie for tourist in the north of the Reception. Looking at the west island, there is for swimming and feeling the atmosphere of the beach. Furthermore, a good place to fish or put the sail boat is Pier where is constructed to the South of the island. Besides, all of them are connected by Footpath and Vehicle track to provide some leisure activities to tourist. By contrast, in the East of the island is almost remains the wild forest.
The two maps compares the
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changes
of an
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island
after the development of convenient tourist.

It is
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clear
that the main construction of the
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involves in the
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centre
and west of the map.
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, the more things
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change
, the more in the east map stay the same.

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Before
the
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change
, the
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island
is nothing to become
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tourist
area.
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After
, it
is built
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a lot of
things to found the
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tourist
area. The
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many
Accommodations construct to take
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a lot of
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tourist
in day or day by day in the
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centre
and west.
In addition
, In middle of group
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houses
is linked
by appearance Reception. Catering services are
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availabie
for
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tourist
in the north of the Reception.

Looking at the west
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island
, there is for swimming and feeling the atmosphere of the beach.
Furthermore
, a
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good
place to fish or put the sail boat is Pier where
is constructed
to the South of the
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island
.
Besides
, all of them
are connected
by Footpath and Vehicle
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track
to provide
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some
leisure activities to
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tourist
. By contrast, in the East of the
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island
is almost remains the wild forest.

IELTS academic The two maps compares the changes of an island after the development of convenient tourist.

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