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The table blow shows the past IELTS exam results achieved by one candidate in the past three years

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The table give information about IELTS accomplishments of x-man during past 3 years. Overall, it is clear that x-man managed to evaluate his/her score over the period as a whole. In details, x-man's listening increased significantly, meanwhile reading remained almost stable. Precisely, listening, in jul 2018 and Feb 2019, was almost the same. However, it escalated by 2 band over the period of 2 years. In terms of reading, it was 8. 0 at the beginning of period, nevertheless, in Feb 2019 and aug 2021 it peaked at maximum band (9. 0) respectively. In contrast, writing and speaking were not as the same as listening and reading. In writing section, x-man achieved the same band over two years, while reading saw by 0. 5 increase in 2018 jul. However, in 2021 Feb and aug witnessed remarkable evaluation with going up by 0. 5 in both section respectively.
The table give information about IELTS accomplishments of x-
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during past 3 years.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that x-
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man
managed to evaluate his/her score over the period as a whole.

In
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details
, x-
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man
's listening increased
significantly
, meanwhile
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reading
remained almost stable.
Precisely
, listening, in
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jul
2018 and Feb 2019, was almost the same.
However
, it escalated by 2
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band
over the period of 2 years. In terms of
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reading
, it was 8. 0 at the beginning of period,
nevertheless
, in Feb 2019 and
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aug
2021 it peaked at maximum band (9. 0)
respectively
.

In contrast
, writing and speaking were not as the same as listening and
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reading
. In writing section, x-
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man
achieved the same band over two years, while
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reading
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saw
by 0. 5 increase in 2018
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jul
.
However
, in 2021 Feb and
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aug
witnessed remarkable evaluation with going up by 0. 5 in both section
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The table blow shows the past IELTS exam results achieved by one candidate in the past three years

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