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It is said that young people should visit other countries as it is beneficial for the development. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give Your own opinion and idea relevant examples from your own experience.

It is said that young people should visit other countries as it is beneficial for the development. Give Your own opinion and idea relevant examples from your own experience. RRP3M
Surely, globalisation has open the gates for travel. There for tourism activities are taking place at large. However, craze has been witnessed in the young generation for travelling overseas for numerous reasons and in my observation travelling is much helpful for their growth as well as for their better future. To begin with, tourism assist in teens Holistic growth. Therefore, it is the gateway for alteration in youngones personality. To brief, travelling caters many purposes, but it aid The individuals to get settled in native countries, it will be better opportunities to them to earn more than bread and butter. Due to this living standard transform. For instance, number of youngsters are moving out from India to other countries and grabbing better jobs, resulting leave leave luxurious life. Apart from this, knowledge in the hands of Teens to next level, As visiting other countries provide greater chance to explore different places, as the result was information about the host countries rituals, ethics, code of conduct gathered by the youngones. To exemplify, Indo US visit to Canada or other foreign countries get to know about their festivals and learn about their athletes as well as opt the same. Hence, knowledge in the hands of the youngster, along with that they get better income to satisfied your daily hunger. Moving further, travelling offers new and exciting experience to travellers. To add on to visiting new places Teens get opportunity to taste different cuisine as well as get chance to learn other languages, develop new accent. To set an example Indian kids who born in other countries when visit to India they explored places and enjoy different food as well as learn different languages of India. Moreover, shifting open gates for the youngster to explore themselves as well as adopt new skills consequently confidence build in them. Overall, no doubt migrating is gateway for holistic development of youngsters. Therefore, I stand with statement as travelling caters variety of benefits to youngones and Aid in their growth.
Surely
,
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globalisation
has open the gates for travel. There for tourism activities are taking
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place
at large.
However
, craze has
been witnessed
in the young generation for
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travelling
overseas for numerous reasons and in my observation
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travelling
is much helpful for their growth as
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well
as for their
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better
future. To
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begin
with, tourism assist in teens Holistic growth.
Therefore
, it is the gateway for alteration in
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youngones
personality. To brief,
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travelling
caters
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many
purposes,
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but
it
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aid
The individuals to
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get
settled in native
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countries
, it will be
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better
opportunities to them to earn more than bread and butter. Due to this living standard transform.
For instance
, number of youngsters are moving out from India to
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other
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countries
and grabbing
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better
jobs, resulting
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leave
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leave
luxurious life. Apart from this, knowledge in the hands of Teens to
next
level, As visiting
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other
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countries
provide greater chance to explore
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different
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places
, as the result was information about the host
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countries
rituals, ethics, code of conduct gathered by the
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youngones
. To exemplify,
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Indo
US visit to Canada or
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other
foreign
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countries
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get
to know about their festivals and learn about their athletes as
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well
as opt the same.
Hence
, knowledge in the hands of the
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youngster
, along with that they
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get
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better
income to satisfied your daily hunger. Moving
further
,
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travelling
offers
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new
and exciting experience to
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travellers
. To
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add
on to visiting
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new
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places
Teens
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get
opportunity to taste
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different
cuisine as
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well
as
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get
chance to learn
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languages, develop
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new
accent. To set an example Indian kids who born in
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other
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countries
when visit to India they explored
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places
and enjoy
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different
food as
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well
as learn
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different
languages of India.
Moreover
, shifting open gates for the
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youngster
to explore themselves as
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well
as adopt
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new
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skills
consequently
confidence build in them.
Overall
, no doubt migrating is gateway for holistic development of youngsters.
Therefore
, I stand with statement as
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travelling
caters variety of benefits to
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youngones
and Aid in their growth.
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IELTS academic It is said that young people should visit other countries as it is beneficial for the development. Give Your own opinion and idea relevant examples from your own experience.

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