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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some touristic facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons, where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some touristic facilities. LrBRG
These are two maps of the same atoll. The first map demonstrates what was originally the island look like, whereas the second one illustrates how did the island resemble after the construction of a restaurant, a reception, a pier and a plethora of bungalows. On the first map, there were not any roads that come across the island and there was a remote beach in the west of it. On the second map, the island witnessed a number of considerable changes. First and foremost, a pier was constructed in the south of the area. Moreover, one vehicle track was built, which linked the pier with the restaurant in the north of the region. Furthermore, a reception was erected in the centre of the island. In addition, two main footpaths were constructed in both east and west of the area. More particularly, the former one led to five bungalows next to the reception building, while the latter to six in the west. Each were connected with the main road by secondary lanes. Finally, a third footpath road made the beach accesible to the public. On the whole, the construction of various tourist facilities has trasformed the island into a place of outdoor entertainment. Although the beach is still the same, it is now accessible via a footpath.
These are two
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maps
of the same atoll. The
first
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map
demonstrates what was
originally
the
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island
look like, whereas the second one illustrates how did the
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island
resemble after the construction of a restaurant, a reception, a pier and a plethora of bungalows.

On the
first
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map
, there were not any roads that
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come
across the
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island
and there was a remote beach in the west of it.

On the second
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map
, the
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island
witnessed a number of considerable
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changes
.
First
and foremost, a pier
was constructed
in the south of the area.
Moreover
, one vehicle
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track
was built
, which linked the pier with the restaurant in the north of the region.
Furthermore
, a reception
was erected
in the
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centre
of the
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island
.
In addition
, two main footpaths
were constructed
in both east and west of the area. More
particularly
, the former one led to five bungalows
next
to the reception building, while the latter to six in the west. Each
were connected
with the main road by secondary lanes.
Finally
, a third footpath road made the beach
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accesible
to the public.

On the whole
, the construction of various tourist facilities has
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trasformed
the
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island
into a place of outdoor entertainment. Although the beach is
still
the same, it is
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now
accessible via a footpath.

IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some touristic facilities.

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