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The map shows the plan of the city of Brandfield with two possible sites’ locations for a shopping mall.

The map shows the plan of the city of Brandfield with two possible sites’ locations for a shopping mall. yXPVD

The map shows the plan of the city of Brandfield with two possible sites’ locations for a shopping mall. It can be seen that both sites under consideration and located in the north and the south-east of the town. The first site (S1) placed in the north of the Brandfield between the river and the road, which run from the south-west and south-east respectively. So if the mall is built there, it will convenient for people from housing estate for access because it is next to it. The second site is in the south-east (S2), the railway, which stretch from the north-west of the town, can be observed on the right side of it. Furthermore, this land lies pretty close to the downtown with industrial estate on the other side of the rail line. The main road goes through the main part of the town and besides the both sites that will provide highway possibility. A large area in the west prevented use as a site by golf course and park construction.

The map This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
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 the plan of the city of Possible spelling mistake found.Brand field
Brandfield
 with two possible You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites’
 locations for a shopping mall. It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 under consideration and located in the north and the south-east of the town.

The first
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site
 (S1) placed in the north of the Possible spelling mistake found.Brand field
Brandfield
 between the river and the road, which run from the south-west and south-east respectively
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 if the mall is built
 there, it It seems that a verb or adverb has been misspelled or is missing here.will be convenientwill have convenient
will convenient
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people
 from housing estate for access This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is next
 to it.

The second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
 is in the south-east (S2), the railway, which stretch from the north-west of the town, can be observed
 on the right side of it. Furthermore
, this land lies pretty close to the downtown with industrial estate on the other side of the rail line.

The main road goes through the main part of the town and besides
 the both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 that will provide highway possibility.

A large area in the west This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precluded
prevented
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
 by golf course and park construction. 