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The shown diagram elucidates the data about Fairtrade prices of tea and pineapples between 2010 and 2015 period.

The shown diagram elucidates the data about Fairtrade prices of tea and pineapples between 2010 and 2015 period. jRom1
The shown diagram elucidates the data about Fairtrade prices of tea and pineapples between 2010 and 2015 period. The diagram consists of 2 tables, which divided into 3 columns that provided information about commodities’ labelled sales, countries where they sailed and the average in million euros. Overall, tea and pineapples’ price increased significantly through the years. In 2010, the tea was highest in Austria with 4 million euros price. However, in Norway this rate was the lowest under the 2 million euros. But in the other 3 countries the ratio variated between 2. 8 and 2 million. It is noticeable that in the next 5 years the value witnessed dramatically rising. The figure reached a peak with 21 million in France and under the 10 million in compared lands. In contrast, at the start point pineapples had the maximum in Austria with 16 million of currencies. The value in the Netherlands and France were from 2 to 1. 6, which were less than in Germany or Norway respectively. Afterwards, at the end of the period the sales slightly changed. In the first three places they went up by three times, while in the last two fell approximately twice. (
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prices of tea and pineapples between 2010 and 2015 period. The diagram consists of 2 tables, which divided into 3 columns that provided information about commodities’ labelled sales, countries where they sailed and the average in
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, tea and pineapples’ price increased
significantly
through the years.

In 2010, the tea was highest in Austria with 4
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million
euros price.
However
, in Norway this rate was the lowest under the 2
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million
euros.
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But
in the other 3 countries the ratio
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variated
between 2. 8 and 2 million.

It is noticeable that in the
next
5 years the value witnessed
dramatically
rising. The figure reached a peak with 21
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million
in France and under the 10
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million
in compared lands.

In contrast
, at the
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start
point pineapples had the maximum in Austria with 16
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million
of currencies. The value in the Netherlands and France were from 2 to 1. 6, which were less than in Germany or Norway
respectively
. Afterwards, at the
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end
of the period the sales
slightly
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changed
. In the
first
three places they went up by three times, while in the last two fell approximately twice.
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IELTS academic The shown diagram elucidates the data about Fairtrade prices of tea and pineapples between 2010 and 2015 period.

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