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The graphs give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. pR592
The charts below provide information related to computer ownership, between 2002 and 2010, its variations can be perceived by the percentage of the population and also by the level of education. Overall, the variation of computer ownership has been framed by different changes. There has been an increase in the population through the 8 years, in addition, computer ownership by education level has been higher in 2010 than in 2002. Firstly, it can be seen that in 2002, the population with computer ownership were around 55% and 60%, it can be seen that over the years the sample has been increasing, however between 2006 and 2008 it can be seen a slight difference of the population of only 5%, besides in 2010 the population was already in a 75% nearly an 80%. Additionally to the increase of population, variations in computer ownership can be seen from the level of education. In 2002 not high school diplomas were only 15% of the whole sample, however, the same population in 2010 had increased to 45%. As the chart shows the population with a postgraduate qualification between the 8 years has increased by around 10%, therefore computer ownership has been higher in 2010.
The charts below provide information related to computer
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ownership
, between 2002 and 2010, its variations can
be perceived
by the percentage of the
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population
and
also
by the level of education.

Overall
, the variation of computer
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ownership
has
been framed
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different
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changes
. There has been an increase in the
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population
through the 8 years,
in addition
, computer
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ownership
by education level has been higher in 2010 than in 2002.

Firstly
, it can be
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seen
that in 2002, the
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population
with computer
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ownership
were around 55% and 60%, it can be
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seen
that over the years the sample has been increasing,
however
between 2006 and 2008 it can be
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seen
a slight difference of the
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population
of
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only
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besides
in 2010 the
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population
was already in a 75%
nearly
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to the increase of
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population
, variations in computer
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ownership
can be
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seen
from the level of education. In 2002 not high school diplomas were
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only
15% of the whole sample,
however
, the same
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population
in 2010 had increased to 45%. As the chart
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shows
the
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population
with a postgraduate qualification between the 8 years has increased by around 10%,
therefore
computer
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ownership
has been higher in 2010.

IELTS academic The graphs give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

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6.0
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