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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. eaeG
The two maps illustrate an island before construction works and after when there were added some tourist facilities. On the first map, there are no facilities or accommodation for resting and spending holidays. There are few palm trees mainly on the eastern part of the map. The vast majority of the island consisted of empty sandy parts. There was no convenient access to the island. The second map depicts the island and its changes after modernization and building new facilities for holidaymakers. After building, there is accommodation for tourists, a restaurant and a reception area. Bungalows are mainly located in the western part of the island and partly on the eastern side. There is a restaurant and a reception area between the housings in the center. Furthermore, there is an area for swimming on the west side of the island. Moreover, there are footpaths and roads which were organized for the convenience of travellers. In the south, there was built a pier, which provides the access to the island. Besides, there are two boats which offer a yachting service. It should be highlighed that palm trees have been conserved. Overall, the construction of new tourist facilities has made the island more attractive for visitors.
The two
maps
illustrate an
island
before
construction works and after when there were
added
some
tourist facilities.

On the
first
map
, there are no facilities or accommodation for resting and spending holidays. There are few palm trees
mainly
on the eastern part of the
map
. The vast majority of the
island
consisted of empty sandy parts. There was no convenient access to the island.

The second
map
depicts the
island
and its
changes
after modernization and building new facilities for holidaymakers. After building, there is accommodation for tourists, a restaurant and a reception area. Bungalows are
mainly
located in the western part of the
island
and partly on the eastern side. There is a restaurant and a reception area between the housings in the center.
Furthermore
, there is an area for swimming on the west side of the
island
.
Moreover
, there are footpaths and roads which
were organized
for the convenience of
travellers
. In the south, there
was built
a pier, which provides the access to the
island
.
Besides
, there are two boats which offer a yachting service. It should be
highlighed
that palm trees have
been conserved
.

Overall
, the construction of new tourist facilities has made the
island
more attractive for visitors.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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