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The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.

The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced. PaMw
The diagram illustrates the process of how leather goods are produced. Overall, there are 11 steps in the process, from when the animal skins are hung up on a rotary clothesline and dried under the sunshine to when the leather is made into shoes, bags and sports equipment. First of all, the animal skins are hung up on a rotary clothesline and dried under the sunlight. Then, the animal skins are delivered to the factory by truck. After that, the animal skins are washed with water and lime. Next, the animal skins are soaked with lime for a particular time. Then, the animal skins are put into a machine and flattened by two rollers. In the next stage, the animal skins are soaked with water and vegetable matter in a tannin. Following that, the leather is polished and transported to the leather factory by truck. Finally, the leather is made into bags, shoes and sports equipment.
The diagram illustrates the process of how
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leather
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goods
are produced
.
Overall
, there are 11 steps in the process, from when the
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animal
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skins
are hung
up on a rotary clothesline and dried under the sunshine to when the
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leather
is made
into shoes, bags and sports equipment.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the
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animal
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skins
are hung
up on a rotary clothesline and dried under the sunlight. Then, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skins
are delivered
to the factory by truck. After that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skins
are washed
with water and lime.
Next
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skins
are soaked
with lime for a particular time. Then, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skins
are put
into a machine and flattened by two rollers. In the
next
stage, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skins
are soaked
with water and vegetable matter in a tannin. Following that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leather
is polished
and transported to the
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leather
factory by truck.
Finally
, the
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leather
is made
into bags, shoes and sports equipment.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.

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2 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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