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The diagram shows how water moves from the sea to the atmosphere and then to land as part of the natural process which known as the water cycle.

The diagram shows how water moves from the sea to the atmosphere and then to land as part of the natural process which known as the water cycle. glDL
The diagram shows how water moves from the sea to the atmosphere and then to land as part of the natural process which known as the water cycle. Overall, there are three major stages are shown on the diagram. Water evaporates from the sea, rivers, and lakes, as well as from trees and plants transpiration, falls as rain, and eventually returns to the sea. Starting with the evaporation stage, the sun's heat causes water to evaporate; the majority of the vapour in the air comes from the sea, with the rest coming from rivers, lakes, and plant transpiration. The wind then blows water vapour together, cools it, and condenses it to form clouds. At the second stage, the wind pushes the clouds to top of a hill, where they cool and rain. At the third stage of the cycle, rainwater can take a variety of paths, with some ending up in lakes and others flowing downstream to the sea via rivers. Otherwise, rainwater may filter through the ground, reaching the rock porous layer of the earth and eventually flowing into lakes and rivers before entering the sea to complete the cycle.
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moves
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to the atmosphere and then to land as part of the natural process which known as the
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cycle.

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, there are three major
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evaporates from the
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,
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rivers
, and
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as from trees and plants transpiration, falls as rain, and
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returns to the sea.

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, the sun's heat causes
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to evaporate; the majority of the
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in the air
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, with the rest coming from
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,
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, and plant transpiration. The wind then blows
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together, cools it, and condenses it to form clouds.

At the second
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, the wind pushes the clouds to top of a hill, where they cool and rain.

At the third
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of the cycle, rainwater can take a variety of paths, with
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via
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.
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, rainwater may filter through the ground, reaching the rock porous layer of the earth and
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before
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to complete the cycle.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how water moves from the sea to the atmosphere and then to land as part of the natural process which known as the water cycle.

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