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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Wp1b

The two diagrams provide information about an island had some reconstructions for people to viset Overall, it can be said that some additions have been made significantly to island. Such as accomodation, restaurant and reception are built. The first map depicts the park in the past. There were trees east of the island. After that, Beach as well as Sea were constructed northwest of island at the beginning of the period. There have been some changes, which can be seen that at the enterence of the island had been made the pier for tourists. In the following stage, reception was connected to bridge by vehicle road. Then, only a restaurant had been introduced behind of the reception. Some attractive accomodations were added arround the trees near of the beach. In the final state, there were a few accomodations in the middle of island. Trees have remained unchanged

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island
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some
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people
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some
 additions have been made
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island
. Such as Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
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, restaurant and reception are built
.

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island
. After that, Beach as well
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island
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some
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seen
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island
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 the pier for tourists. In the following stage, reception was connected
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only
 a restaurant had been introduced
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accomodations
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added
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arround
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accomodations
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island
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