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The plans below show the layout of a university's

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The given maps illustrate a university's sports centre present plan and thr future plan after reconstruction. As the overview, the sports centre looks simple and have less facilities now, but after number of changes will be made to the new sports centre including more infrastructures and items. Considering the first map, can be seen limited facilities. There are two outdoor courts situated on both sides of the indoor section. The main entrance is south to the pool and faces now and future. The pool to the west is changing room which will be at the same place after the rebuilt. The gym has been in north to the pool while the seating area is east to tye pool. According to the future plans, the map looks complicated by its structure. The outdoor courts will be demolished and have replaced a leisure pool and a sports hall there. Two dancing studios in the east and gym will expand upto dance studio. Can be seen three changing rooms, one is made before and another two will be built in the two corners in the area. Sports shop and cafe going to be the extra facilities for members.
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maps illustrate a university's
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sports
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centre
present plan and
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thr
future plan after reconstruction. As the overview, the
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sports
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centre
looks simple and have
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less
facilities
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now
,
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after number of
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changes
will
be made
to the new
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sports
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centre
including more infrastructures and items. Considering the
first
map, can be
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seen
limited facilities. There are two outdoor courts situated on both sides of the indoor section. The main entrance is south to the
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pool
and faces
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now
and future. The
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pool
to the west is changing room which will be at the same place after the rebuilt.
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The
gym has been in north to the
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pool
while the seating area is east to
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tye
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pool
. According to the future plans, the map looks complicated by its structure. The outdoor courts will
be demolished
and have replaced a leisure
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pool
and a
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sports
hall there. Two dancing studios in the east and gym will expand
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upto
dance studio. Can be
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seen
three changing rooms, one
is made
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before
and another two will
be built
in the two corners in the area.
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Sports
shop and
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cafe
going to be the extra facilities for members.
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