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The bar chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education.

The bar chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. lJ81
The bar chart describes the number of girls for every 100 boys who are enrolled in various levels of Education at school in 1990 and 1998. Overall, it is clear that the girl’s percentage in 1998 is higher than in 1990. In Tertiary Education compared to other two the scores were risen up a bit. In Developed Countries the scores of participating in study by girls is higher and rising with respect to Higher Education of schooling. The Developing Countries of Primary Education consists of 82 girls in 1990 where it has 85 out of hundred boys in 1998. Compared to this, the score for Developed Country is much higher in both years of about 92 and 95. In contrast, the Secondary Education has low percentage compared to Primary Education in Developing ones in both years. On the contrary it has risen up for developed Countries in which the scores are above 95. Consequently, for Tertiary Education the scores for Developing Countries are far lesser than any other Education (below 80) in both years. Despite this, the percentage for developed countries are exceeding the limit of boys and settling at 105 as well as 110 in 1990 and 1998 years respectively.
The bar chart
describes
the number of
girls
for every 100 boys who
are enrolled
in various levels of
Education
at school in 1990 and 1998.

Overall
, it is
clear
that the
girl’s
percentage in 1998 is higher than in 1990. In Tertiary
Education
compared to other two the
scores
were risen
up a bit. In
Developed
Countries
the
scores
of participating in study by
girls
is higher and rising with respect to Higher
Education
of schooling.

The Developing
Countries
of Primary
Education
consists of 82
girls
in 1990 where it has 85 out of hundred boys in 1998. Compared to this, the
score
for
Developed
Country
is much higher in both years of about 92 and 95.

In contrast
, the Secondary
Education
has low percentage compared to Primary
Education
in Developing ones in both years.
On the contrary
it has risen up for
developed
Countries
in which the
scores
are above 95.

Consequently
, for Tertiary
Education
the
scores
for Developing
Countries
are far lesser than any other
Education
(below 80) in both years. Despite this, the percentage for
developed
countries
are exceeding the limit of boys and settling at 105
as well
as 110 in 1990 and 1998 years
respectively
.
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