Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. RGYp
The two given maps compare an island prior to and following the developments brought out for tourism purposes. Overall, it is obvious that accommodations and other facilities were built with a pier was constructed for boats and ships to access the island. At the first glance, it is noticed that the entire number of accommodations and facilities such as a reception house and a restaurant for tourists were located in the middle of the island and surrounded by circular footpaths. However, the original coconut trees were still preserved as a natural symbol of the island. Furthermore, there was a long and small pier established in the southeast of the island for visitors inland safely by boats. Besides, the beach which was on the western edge of the island, was available for tourists to swim. In summary, the whole island was transformed almost completely from a natural and deserted one to a modern and convenient destination for tourists to spend their holidays.
The two
given
maps compare an
island
prior to and following the developments brought out for tourism purposes.

Overall
, it is obvious that accommodations and other facilities
were built
with a pier
was constructed
for boats and ships to access the island.

At the
first
glance, it
is noticed
that the entire number of accommodations and facilities such as a reception
house
and a restaurant for tourists
were located
in the middle of the
island
and surrounded by circular footpaths.
However
, the original coconut trees were
still
preserved as a natural symbol of the
island
.
Furthermore
, there was a long and
small
pier established in the southeast of the
island
for visitors inland
safely
by boats.
Besides
, the beach which was on the western edge of the
island
, was available for tourists to swim.

In summary, the whole
island
was transformed
almost completely from a natural and deserted one to a modern and convenient destination for tourists to spend their holidays.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
161 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: