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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. g0Ql
The information about reasons which affected agricultural land become less productive and unwelcome consequences which faced by three different regions in the periof of 1999s is revealed in the given pie chart and table. It is worth noting that over-grazing occupied the biggest proportion of worlwide land gradation while the highest degraded land rate was in Europe. Turning into details, almost a third of land degradation was depicted by over-grazing, 5% different from deforestation. Then, followed by over-cultivation (28%) which was four folds of other causes. Moving into table, the total land degraded in Europe was just below 25%. Only 5. 5 percent for over-grazing, which deforestation doubled of it and over-cultivation showed a small number of almost 8%. Australia and New Zealand included in the area of South Pacific which has 13% land degraded, was caused by 1. 7% of deforestation and 11. 3% of oveegraze. Interestingly, North America has the least total land degraded (5% only) which was deforesttation only showed by 0. 2 percent then followed by uncommon cultivation and grazing, 3. 3% and 1. 5% respectively.
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

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