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The maps below show Harrison’s Stables in 1920 and in 2010

The maps below show Harrison’s Stables in 1920 and in 2010 YNGj
According to we looked graph shown Harrison's Stables in 1920 and in 2020. The first graph have two cottages and one main house as well as one barn, but have a one riding path to put middle to give people exercise, beside, riding path aside have fence to use isolate riding path exercise damage. In addition, fence lift have a huge stable to use giving horse to rest and weeding as well as stables right have a public field where will happen new regulation for Harrison's Stables in 1920. The second graph have huge different, entrance the second map looked have new office block, we know the first graph without as well as to have new car park to give office block using, beside the second graph not have main house, cottages and barn. beside, the second map stables was double than the first map as well as fence and riding path became small double than the first graph. in conclusion, the second graph stable is more two one than the first map as well as second graph have huge office block and the first without, beside the facilities had became the first fence and riding path is more two one than the second, as well as the second graph is not field region in 2020.
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shown Harrison's
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in 1920 and in 2020. The
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have two cottages and one main
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to put middle to give
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exercise, beside,
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exercise damage.
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giving horse to rest and weeding as
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right have a public field where will happen new regulation for Harrison's
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Stables
in 1920. The second
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have huge
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without as
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is not field region in 2020.
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