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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. NOpW

The maps illustrate the development of visitor facilities in an island from before to after. Overall, it is noticeable that there are significant changes after the re-construction. Moreover, the pier has been built and there are 2 sailing boats on each side. Although many accommodations have been manufactured, the builders do not remove those palm trees. Focusing on before the changes, the island only have 4 groups of palm trees located randomly on the east and west sides. In addition, the east side of the island has a small beach next to the upper sea. On the contrary, the remaining areas on the island are blank and do not have any functions. Turning to after the changes, the builders has constructed the reception area inside the circular vehicle track at the middle of all the facilities that link to the pier and the restaurant at the north of an island. Furthermore, there are many hotels on the east and west side of the information building and has made a footpath directly to each accommodation. There are a tremendous changes for tourist facilities; however, the constructors do not remove the remaining palm trees.

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island
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, the builders do not remove those palm trees.

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changes
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island
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small
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island
 are blank and do not have any functions.

Turning to after the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
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island
. Furthermore
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 hotels on the east and west side of the information building and has made a footpath directly
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, the constructors do not remove the remaining palm trees. 