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The bar chart shows the amounts of money in thousands of euros spent on different types of sponsorship by two companies－Awesome and Best.

The bar chart shows the amounts of money in thousands of euros spent on different types of sponsorship by two companies－Awesome and Best. rdyN
The bar chart shows the amounts of money in thousands of euros spent on different types of sponsorship by two companies－Awesome and Best. Overall, Best spent more money on sponsorship than Awesome. Both companies spent the most money on sports sponsorship, with Best spending 500, 000 euros whereas Awesome spent 400, 000. Best spent twice as much money as Awesome on charities, at 200, 000 and 100, 000 respectively. In contrast, Awesome spent 200, 000 on scholarships, while Best spent only 150, 000 in this area. Both companies spent the least money on arts and culture sponsorship, at approximately 50, 000 euros on this type.
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400, 000.
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200, 000 on scholarships, while
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, at approximately 50, 000 euros on this type.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the amounts of money in thousands of euros spent on different types of sponsorship by two companies－Awesome and Best.

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