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The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS Academic paper in 2015.

The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS Academic paper in 2015. 2L1w
The table illustrates the IELTS academic results of various students from different countries who had appeared exam in 2015. Overall, there are four sets of skill namely listening, Reading, Writing and Speaking. The candidates have to score above band score six to pass the test. Here, Garman student have performed well in all the parts. In contrast, Indonesian student's overall band score is less compared to others but excelled in one set amongst the rest candidates. On the one hand, German student got good overall result of 6. 7 out of 9. Listening, Writing and Speaking parts were above 6. 5 but Reading remain below 6. 5. In addition to that French student has achieve with the band score of 6. 5 which means that he or she can get foreign Visa. Following, Malay student accomplished overall band score under 6. 5. He or she is good at Listening skill with a score of 6. 7 on the contrary poor in Reading and writing parts. Lastly, Indonesian student's final result is 6. 3 which is less amongst others. He or she did not do well in Writing section but did well in Speaking area. Therefore, Indonesian needs to focus more on writing section.
The table illustrates the IELTS academic results of various
students
from
different
countries who had appeared exam in 2015.

Overall
, there are four sets of
skill
namely
listening, Reading,
Writing
and Speaking. The candidates
have to
score
above
band
score
six to pass the
test
. Here,
Garman
student
have performed well in all the parts.
In contrast
, Indonesian student's
overall
band
score
is less compared to others
but
excelled in one set amongst the rest candidates.

On the one hand, German
student
got
good
overall
result of 6. 7 out of 9. Listening,
Writing
and Speaking parts were above 6. 5
but
Reading remain below 6. 5.
In addition
to that French
student
has
achieve
with the
band
score
of 6. 5 which means that he or she can
get
foreign Visa.

Following, Malay
student
accomplished
overall
band
score
under 6. 5. He or she is
good
at Listening
skill
with a
score
of 6. 7
on the contrary
poor in Reading and
writing
parts.
Lastly
, Indonesian student's final result is 6. 3 which is less amongst others. He or she did not do well in
Writing
section
but
did well in Speaking area.
Therefore
, Indonesian needs to focus more on
writing
section.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS Academic paper in 2015.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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